Hollys twist on little red riding hood

W.A.L.T: rewrite a traditional tale with a kiwi twist using descriptive language.

Little Whero Riding Hood and the Taniwha

This story is about Little Whero Riding Hood, her granny, a tuatara plus a scary taniwha.

Once upon a time there lived  Little Whero Riding Hood and her mother. One day her mother baked kiwi shaped muffins to give to Little Whero’s grandmother, she was really ill. Little Whero was really excited because she never had gone to her granny’s house.

When she was on her way she saw a TANIWHA! Little Whero ran and ran she didn’t stop till she reached her grandmother’s house, her nanny was not here. She looked everywhere but she did not find her. She was scared really scared, ‘Nanny, ’she called, ‘where are you?’

She was so scared that she staggered into the living room. In the living room on the couch there was a blanket and under the blanket was her granny. She was so excited that she threw the baskets with kiwi shaped muffins and all of them fell out. Poor Little Whero she didn’t know that under the blanket was the taniwha! Then suddenly the taniwha popped up and ate Little Whero. While the taniwha was enjoying his supper Little Whero’s grandma was picking flowers.

While she was on her way home she saw a tuatara the tuatara told granny that the taniwha had eaten little Whero . When  grandma heard this she nearly cried. She loved Little Whero and was heart broken. She cried out to the Tuatara and   replied, “Oohh   Tuatara,” she said, “Can you think of an way I can help her ?” “Well”, the Tuatara said with a low voice, “I can try and do that mate, but it might be hard , I need help,” “Oohh,” whisperd grandma because her throat is sore , “ I could call all the animals in the forest to help you. ”Grandma replied , but she was crying secretly and the Tuatara had heard her and he said  “ she’ll be right , calm down ,”So  grandma did . Back at the house the taniwha was watching TV after the lovely meal he didn’t know that the tuatara the forest animals and grandma.

 Little Whero was still inside of the taniwha’s tummy she shouted “You old hag let me outa here or I’ll smack your head!” The taniwha just laughed but Little Whero crawled and crawled  until she got up to where the taniwha’s liver was keept and hit it , the taniwha cried out “hey, bro stop it hurts .” But Little Whero didn’t she just wouldn’t . The Taniwha cried out again “stop it , it hurts , ouch , no not that bit a aaaaaaa !” While Little Whero was hurting the taniwha the tuatara, granny and the forest animals came and hit the taniwha and he was dead. They cut open the dead tummy and saved Little whero and lived happily ever after.