Monday, 10 June 2013

Brodens take on The three little billy goats


W.A.L.T: rewrite a traditional tale with links to kiwiana using descriptive language.

The three little sheep

One sunny day there were three little sheep they had no grass they were so hungry.Just then they saw heaps of grass on the other side of a bridge. So they jumped over the fence.

Then they thought the littlest sheep had to go first to see if it was safe. But as soon as he got on the bridge a dog as black as the road whispered from under the bridge “who’s trotting over my bridge?” “It’s just me” cried the little sheep. The dog growled “I’m going to gobble you up.” The little sheep cried “wait for my brother he has heaps of meat on him.” “Ok” growled the dog “hurry or I will eat you.”
The medium sheep trots onto the bridge. The dog climbs up on to the bridge and licks his lips saying “I’m going to gobble you up” the medium sheep cries “wait for my big brother.” “Ok” growled the dog “hurry or I will eat you”.
 The big sheep trots onto the bridge. The dog climbs up onto the bridge and growled “I’m going to gobble you up.” “no you’re not” yelled the big sheep as he rammed the dog off the bridge and quickly trotted into the green grass.

And they never saw that bad dog again until… but that’s another story

THE END!!

 

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